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Ramses stands at the top of the peak engulfed in the moonlight. As he looks out over the land he wonders if he will ever find a place to call home. He and his four brothers moved to Tucson nine months ago and now they have to find a new place to live before the Gahiji try to kill them all. Ramses shakes his head to get the nightmares from he mind. He runs down the peak to the ranch his brothers and him live. As he reaches the fence that surrounds the ranch he sees part of it is braking.